New song!! New song!!!

[Laura Chow]

Guys, I just wrote another new song!

It's not done yet but don't panic.. sit your butt down.. I'll get it fixed. I was very excited coz I was playing Oasis - Wonderwall and was messing with the chords and everything. I found words in my head and started singing it. I couldn't believe what I spoke out of my mouth and it rhymed too! ;D I hardly ever find something to rhyme with whenever I'm writing. I'm starting to get better and hopefully will continue to grow as time pass me by.

alright, I will not hold you hostage longer. I'll give you the link:
My New Song!

I actually have another link to new song already but that's me talking about my new song Thinking About You so I'm just gonna put this as new song 2. hahaha..

Enjoy! ;D

[musiclover28463]

GREAT LAURA
Listening to it 4th time.
Since first time tho' I think of it as having title of "Between Us"
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[thephoenixmaster]

yup i hear some Wonderwall in that.

but its awesome Laura. keep it up you rock star you!

[Laura Chow]

whoa, this song rocks. hahaha.
I'm listening to all these new songs that I haven't really record properly. Man, I really wish that I have my mic right now coz I really want to record!!!
and I miss my room! All the previous songs that I've recorded, I usually record it using the desktop back home which is in my living room so the room wasn't so compact and small like my room. Now that I'm listening to Thinking About You, Between Us and urm.. Can't you, I really really miss my room and really wish that I'm there right now so I can record.

[musiclover28463]

admin said:

...Now that I'm listening to ... Between Us ... I really really miss my room and really wish that I'm there right now so I can record.

L adopted my title suggestion
I wish u could record now, too !
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[Laura Chow]

You give pretty good ones.. had to keep it.

[musiclover28463]

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[Laura Chow]

I don't wanna make another thread. lol. coz my new song is still untitled.. if it wasn't, I would make another thread. hahaha.

Alright.. so here we go:

Tell me what life is to you coz I don't know
I feel so meaningless, so shallow, so low
I'm always in sorrow that I wish I'm a sparrow
so I can just fly away far away right now

Is life beautiful to you coz mine is not
I try to look on the bright side but I guess I cannot
If my life's a line there'll be lots of lots of knots
but I guess that's becoz I have all these thoughts

Do you know how many nights I cry myself to sleep
Man.. these thoughts are getting really deep

So help me..

Can you save me from this misery I beg of you
help me get out of here I want to go with you
I gotta go I gotta go I gotta breakthrough
hang on I'll pack my bags and I'll be right there with you

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I recorded it yesterday. I added too much effect to it and now I don't know how to take it back. I'm using Cool Edit, a software Steve introduced me. It's awesome.. now I just need to know how to undo the effects. lol. It's great.. I like how everything goes. so sit tight and hopefully I'll be able to make it sound just right and I'll post it.

[musiclover28463]

admin said:

... It's great.. I like how everything goes. so sit tight and hopefully I'll be able to make it sound just right and I'll post it.

to that
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[Jackson]

I love it Laura. The title could be better though in my estimation. I love it though