Post by Laura Chow on May 28, 2005 20:41:01 GMT -5
Aah, finally I wrote a song! lol. After trying so hard. *phew*
Well, here are the lyrics. I still wanna work on the first 2 verses. I don't like how the words go with the melody but I'm way too excited about producing another new song so I'm just gonna post it over here and will post the new one when I polished it. nice deal? alright.
Lyrics:
Can't You?
Baby it's hard to explain when things happen
I didn't wanna hide my feelings either
Instead of getting away running away
My emotions just deepened
Baby it happened so fast like the lightning
And like the change of the weather
I wanna run away run away run away
because I don't know what to do
Tell me why you're unpredictable
I felt as if I was the one chasing you
I can't deny because you're irresistible
But after I pulled back, you left me feeling blue
Can't you see that I want you?
Can't see you see that I need you?
Baby I can't live a day without you
Can't you feel my love around you?
Can't you say you love me too?
Baby all I need to say is I want you too
Baby ooh things would have been so much better
If only I had known
If only I had known, I'd still be holding on
I'd still be holding on to you
Oh why didn't I see this coming towards me?
You never told me you love me too
Oh I feel so stupid now
My world was crashed
And I can do nothing about it
Chorus
It's just that simple, I love you
But it seems too late now
To make you change your mind
Chorus
So, tell me what you think. I've recorded the audio too! lol. I'm not really fixed with anything yet so there are some mistakes on how the word goes during the recording but hope it'll give you a little idea of how the song goes and tell me what you think.
Here you go:
Can't You?
Enjoy! [/size]
Well, here are the lyrics. I still wanna work on the first 2 verses. I don't like how the words go with the melody but I'm way too excited about producing another new song so I'm just gonna post it over here and will post the new one when I polished it. nice deal? alright.
Lyrics:
Can't You?
Baby it's hard to explain when things happen
I didn't wanna hide my feelings either
Instead of getting away running away
My emotions just deepened
Baby it happened so fast like the lightning
And like the change of the weather
I wanna run away run away run away
because I don't know what to do
Tell me why you're unpredictable
I felt as if I was the one chasing you
I can't deny because you're irresistible
But after I pulled back, you left me feeling blue
Can't you see that I want you?
Can't see you see that I need you?
Baby I can't live a day without you
Can't you feel my love around you?
Can't you say you love me too?
Baby all I need to say is I want you too
Baby ooh things would have been so much better
If only I had known
If only I had known, I'd still be holding on
I'd still be holding on to you
Oh why didn't I see this coming towards me?
You never told me you love me too
Oh I feel so stupid now
My world was crashed
And I can do nothing about it
Chorus
It's just that simple, I love you
But it seems too late now
To make you change your mind
Chorus
So, tell me what you think. I've recorded the audio too! lol. I'm not really fixed with anything yet so there are some mistakes on how the word goes during the recording but hope it'll give you a little idea of how the song goes and tell me what you think.
Here you go:
Can't You?
Enjoy! [/size]